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Re: Chloe
Hi there! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today! :) She took Noah’s hand and led him towards the reception, though it was plain for anyone to see ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Mockingbird [pt. 2]
Hi Kylan. Sorry it took so long for me to get to this last part of the story. Well, I have to say that you tied everything together very well ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Mockingbird [pt. 1]
Well, Ky, here we go. I'll try to be as coherent as possible. So, this story is all right. It's not great, but it is good. Of course, the only ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Brains
Hi Snoink! So, I have kind of a one up on this because you told me what the Brains were on MSN. I'll go into this review knowing that, but ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: And The Skies Are Not Cloudy All Day (7)
Okay Ky, I am here with my review. I remember you gave me an early copy of this chapter. This version here is a significant improvement on that. The part ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Evergreen [revised]
Hi Ky, Yes. This. This is it. You must submit this to the Lit Journal because this will be picked and you will become awesome and conquer Stephanie Meyer and ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: And The Skies Are Not Cloudy All Day (6)
Kylan- I feel it necessary to repeat again that I am not fond of the first person points of view in this story. That may be because I am completely ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Runaway~ The Journey of Thieves (the beginning)
I like the idea that you present here, and I think that it can turn into a very good story given enough time. However, I do want to caution you ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Through the Kerr Hole
Hi Minerva! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today! Neal lay dispiritedly on the hard bed in his cell. Cut out 'dispiritedly'. Adverbs are not your friend. ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: The Sword Breaks
Hi KnightlyAngel! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today! I liked this poem. It was simplistic, said what it wanted to and didn't overstay its welcome, and ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: ...
Hi Prok! So, this was filled with a lot of black humor awesomeness, just the sort of thing I would expect from you. I didn't find much wrong with this ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: theatre fantastique
Hello Medusa! I'm Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today! *giggles* Anyways, let's get down to business, shall we? The curtains are a burnt orange, but with none ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: And The Skies Are Not Cloudy All Day (5)
Sorry it took me so long to get to this, Ky. My dad had us go out and cut firewood while I was in the middle of reviewing, so I ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: The Magic Flute
Well, this is a delightfully different story than what is usually put up on YWS, Jabbs. I have to say that I like it a great deal. I agree with ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Watching Mermaids
Hello Sofi, I will be your friendly neighborhood reviewer for tonight. :) So, I did like the first part of this piece, when you switched back and forth between stream ...
Dec 24, 2008
